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发表于 2006-11-24 14:35:32
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恩 下面可能会被列为恶搞时间
是这样的…… 我认为 Inspiration 与其单调的翻译为鼓舞，不如取其灵感的本意。而这词本身有启发之意，严肃点的词就是启示（一般是神对凡人）
综合后面的各种情况我把 Inspiration 作为（灵感启示）双解。因为后面的不太好翻译，我根据自己的节奏调了。感觉实在没有必要什么都改成提振。当然我保留了原规则的部分。
比如 提振士气 提振技能之类的。××启示也是我的翻译，比起后面2个还算比较规矩吧。最后2个本人实在无法忍受死板的翻译。于是出了“拖音滞调”这个比较中文的翻译。语法上来说有点互文的效果，说白了就是把对手的行动节奏比喻成随着拖长的节奏逐步走向缓慢的感觉，似乎有点小意境，还算得意之作吧（可能不太准确，不知大家能不能接受或者认同）
基本上我觉得诗人的东西不能翻的太直白了，搞艺术的么一板一眼的翻会让人抓狂的。于是我尝试一下对敌和对友的 Inspiration 走两种风格……（深刻感觉设计bard人偷懒什么都用 Inspire 这种缥缈到可以的词再加一个搭配度极差的实词不是要命么？）
最后一个感觉就不怎么样了，基本是前一个凑上去的，估计只能姑且看看（体现我翻到后来的忍无可忍～汗）。反正先贴出来，一来征求一下意见，如果接受度尚可，也算一种方案。如果实在不堪入目就当娱乐翻译众，轻松一下气氛好了。hoho
我的翻译节奏实在有够“拖音滞调”的……不过也没办法……真的拉
* 提振士气（1级）：This gives a bonus to hit and damage. It starts at +1, and becomes +2 at 8th level, +3 at 14th level, and +4 at 20th level.
* 提振技能（2级）：This gives a skill bonus to all allies. It starts at +2 and becomes +4 at 11th level and +6 at 19th level.
* 防御启示（5 级）：This gives a dodge AC bonus to all allies. It starts at +2 and becomes +3 at 10th level. +4 at 15th level. and +5 at 20th level.
* 再生启示 (7级)：This heals all party members a certain number of hit points every round. This starts at 2 hit points per round, becomes 4 at 12th level, and 6 at 17th level.
* 坚韧启示（8级）：This gives a bonus to saving throws for all allies. It starts at +1, then +2 at 13th level, and then +3 at 18th level.
* 拖音滞调 (11级)：All enemies that come within 20 feet of the bard have to make a Will save (DC 13 + = Bard level + CHA modifier) otherwise they will be slowed down. Initially they are slowed down 15% but at 16th level they are slowed by 30%. There are no further penalties besides movement, unlike the slow spell.
* 破词滥调（14级):：All enemies within 20' of the bard suffer a -4 penalty to all Concentration checks and -2 to all Will saves.
具体描述暂时还没上去，那个很快就搞定了…… |
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